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Post by Stark on Thu Jul 14, 2011 6:45 pm

Jacob:
I sigh. I put my hand on the back of my hand and when I bring it back in front of me I am holding a small blue microchip. "Say hello to my on board AI. This is Jenna. Does anyone have a cell phone or something"

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Post by Banshee on Thu Jul 14, 2011 10:17 pm

Andrew's eyes grew wide. "That's....amazing!" he said, appearing next to the chip.

"Idoit..." muttered Ezra, smirking.
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Post by Stark on Fri Jul 15, 2011 6:25 pm

Jacob:
"GODDAMN! Stop doing that!" I say when Andrew appears. "Cell phone? Anyone?"

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Post by Banshee on Fri Jul 15, 2011 6:28 pm

"Do what?" asked Andrew, looking up.

"I do," said Ezra, "though it's off, in my pocket, and I highly doubt you'll get reception here. Why?"
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Post by Echo on Fri Jul 15, 2011 8:13 pm

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"Very likely as a means for Jenna to speak to us," I said. "Is that right, Jackal? And you, Ezra, are incredibly slow-witted."
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Post by Banshee on Fri Jul 15, 2011 8:45 pm

"I am not!" said Ezra defensivly.

"Are too!" laughed Andrew, and so began the "are not, are to fight." Liz sighed transforming back into a dragon. She swung her tail around, making Ezra and Andrew fall to the ground.

"Both of you...shut up! Please!"
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Post by Stark on Sat Jul 16, 2011 12:16 pm

Jacob:
"You are correct demon. Jenna go ahead" I say. The slight blue glow from the chip dissapears and Ezra's phone starts to get the same glow coming from the screen. Then from the screen a 3D holographic image of a blue woman about 16 appears.

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I stand there and look around at them. My sensors picking out distinguishing features such as scars or tattoos... or scales. I blink a few times getting used to the phone's code then I say, "Hiya, I'm Jenna. How's it going?"

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Post by Banshee on Sat Jul 16, 2011 12:22 pm

Ezra reached int his pocket, taking out the phone and putting it on the ground. "Here, that may be easier."

Andrew gapped at Jenna, "Thats...how...how are you doing that?"

"It's a hologram," Liz explained.
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Post by Stark on Sat Jul 16, 2011 12:25 pm

Jenna:
"No, its a screen" I say to Liz. "I am using the screen to make a holographic projection, and I am an AI not a hologram. I am also using the phones camera and screen to bend the light around the phone to make the" I look pointedly at Liz, "holographic projection"

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Post by Banshee on Sat Jul 16, 2011 12:36 pm

"Oh well...you know what I mean."

"No...no I really don't." Andrew said, shaking his head in confusion.

Liz sighed, resting her head on her claws in dragon form. "It's hard to explain Andrew. You just got the summary from Jenna, and you get some of the things you've learned." She hadn't expected to explain something this complicated to him.
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Post by Echo on Sat Jul 16, 2011 4:10 pm

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"And yet again," I began, "this is your fault for not keeping with the times. Or moving on. This technology really isn't hard to grasp at all!"
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Post by Banshee on Sat Jul 16, 2011 5:50 pm

"Sorry...I did learn and see somethings...like the beatles...they had good music..." Andrew sighed.

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Re: C. D. - character development

Post by Stark on Sun Jul 17, 2011 11:03 pm

Jacob:
"What are the Beetles?" I ask, "Aren't they that ancient classical music group?" I ask.

Jenne:
"They performed rock n roll in the nineteen sixties" I explain.

Jacob:
"They sound classical"

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Post by Echo on Sun Jul 17, 2011 11:33 pm

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"No, dear," I said. "Classical is a completely different style. For the record, just because something is old doesn't mean it's classical; it's merely old. Rock 'n' roll is still rock 'n' roll, no matter how old it is. Classical music is the genre, not the age."
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Re: C. D. - character development

Post by Regret on Mon Jul 18, 2011 4:45 am

((Oh hey! It's Cortana.))

"Witchcraft!" hisses Ventrix. "What new devilry is this?"

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Post by Banshee on Mon Jul 18, 2011 8:31 am

"I'm not that old," Andrew snapped at Jacob, "yeah, I'm more then a century old but still."

Ezra looked at Ventrix, "It's not witchcraft, it's science."
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Post by Stark on Mon Jul 18, 2011 9:41 am

Jacob:
"Yeah, science... and a little bit of cheating" I say chuckling guiltily.

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I glare at Jacob.

Jacob:
"And ghost person, if you were still there in my time, you would probably be over 600. And like from that stupid book from the 21st century, I think it was called Twidawn or something, anyway, there is nothing more pathetic than a 100 year old guy who is single"

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Post by Banshee on Mon Jul 18, 2011 9:45 am

"My name is Andrew, get it right! And well....." Andrew paused, looking at Liz.
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Re: C. D. - character development

Post by Stark on Mon Jul 18, 2011 9:55 am

Jacob:
"Oh! You like a living person? I don't really see how that will work out. Besides what about Ezra?" I say.

Jenna:
"Don't try to hurt his feelings Jacob!"

Jacob:
"Its Jackal when we're in the field"

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Post by Banshee on Mon Jul 18, 2011 10:08 am

Andrew sighed, sitting next to Liz, who was still in her dragon form. "It's fine till she tells me, I have to move on. Then Ezra showed up one day...."

Liz turned her huge head towards him, she gave him a sad look. "But you do. You can't stay here anymore."
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Post by Stark on Mon Jul 18, 2011 10:28 am

Jacob:
"Oh! You guys are so sad! Boo hoo!" I say sarcastically. "Wanna know what happened to my girlfriend? She got eaten by a werewolf!" I snap. "Jenna show them the footage from my helmet feed"

Jenna:
"What? Are you sure? Its seriously gruesome!"

Jacob:
I look at Jenna and say "Yeah"

Jenna:
I nod and disappear from the phone. Instead I am replaced by the face of a girl about 15, Jacob's age. She is smiling. Then the feed zooms out and shows she is holding a gun and is in full combat fatigues. Her smile suddenly fades. The camera feed swivels around to look behind whoever is holding it. A jet black werewolf is crouching on a cliff a few feet up. We hear Jacob say, "What the hell! This is supposed to be vamp territory, I don't have any silver" The werewolf jumps. It lands on top of the girl. She screams in pain and terror as the werewolf tears into her flesh with animal like ferocity but human like malice. The last thing she says before she dies is, "Run" she wheezes it through the blood filling her lungs. Jacob doesn't move he is frozen to the spot in horror. The beast tears the girl's head off and flings it behind it. Her head rolls to the feet of the person wearing the camera. Looking back up at the beast it is now facing the camera blood covering it from head to toe a bit of the girl's flesh hanging from its mouth. Behind it is the mangled corpse of the poor girl. Her chest cavity is completely empty. Her arms and legs have been torn off. She is headless. The sight of the body would make anyone sick. The beast charges. The person wearing the helmet turns and runs. The camera feed goes black.

Jacob:
After the feed has ended I realize tears have filled my eyes. I almost start sobbing. Instead I wipe away the tears and just stand there.

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Post by Banshee on Mon Jul 18, 2011 10:35 am

Andrew sat there dumbfounded, "That's...horrible."

Ezra looked away, he couldn't watch that. Liz looked upset.

"I'm so sorry," she whispered, "that's just terrible."
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Post by Stark on Mon Jul 18, 2011 10:41 am

Jacob:
"Yeah, that was before I was Machinae. Her name was Jenna. If I had been Machinae at the time I would have torn the Were's head off" I say solemnly.

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Post by Banshee on Mon Jul 18, 2011 10:44 am

"Is...is it that Jenna?" Andrew asked, pointing to the Jenna that was here.
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Post by Stark on Mon Jul 18, 2011 10:53 am

Jacob:
"No, they tried a consciousness transfer, mostly because I demanded it. She had been dead too long. It was unsuccessful. Before you can get an on board AI they take your consciousness and put it into a machine and you and the AI that has chosen you share memories and feelings. In the end the AI picks a name for itself and becomes your constant companion and friend. AI stands for Artificial Intelligence, and the intelligence part really holds true. I don't know if they have souls or not but most AIs I meet tend to act like humans. After Jenna and I did our consciousness mixture we both woke up. Her in the micro chip in my mind, me in my body. She informed us that she would be called Jenna. At first I nearly exploded with anger. I was against her naming herself after the person that had been closest to my heart. After a while, I was glad of the reminder. It meant I would never forget her. I was glad for that, now Jenna and I are best friends"

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