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Post by Echo on Wed Jul 02, 2014 6:30 pm

MARY SUE CHAT GO.

What? Yeah, you heard me. Let's all try to make the worst, most painfully perfect Mary Sues/Gary Stus we can possibly make. Go completely overboard! Let's get dangerous.

Why? Because it'll be hilarious and fun, that's why!

Setting is a boarding school for magically and/or otherwise immensely gifted students. It's called Edenhart Academy for Supernatural Unique Exceptionals (thanks for the name help, Gh!), because you know you gotta have that magical, fancy-sounding name in there. It looks something like this, except without the baseball players in the front of the picture:



That looks old and pretentious enough, yeah? Yeah. Yeah.

For school uniforms, we're totally House-of-Nighting this business. You just have to wear the sweater that was given to you, and then you can wear whatever else you want. The sweater is black, has a V-neck, and has the school's symbol on the left side of the chest (your left). The symbol is...idk? Think something magical. If it's magical and special, that's the symbol. So yeah, you can layer something under the sweater, you can wear pants or a skirt with it, whatever. What do you mean uniforms have to make people look alike? What do you mean that looking alike is the meaning of the word "uniform"? Preposterous.

There is one other requirement for the clothes you wear: They have to look decent and nice. You're going to a fancy private boarding school! Dress nicely! But we all know Sues get away with wearing ridiculous things in school, so like, whatever, man.

Here's the character sheet. Feel free to ignore it and/or make your own, though, since many Sue-writers have a tendency to blatantly ignore the rules set in the opening post. For our own purposes, however, at least include what your character looks like somewhere! That's an actual rule.

Name:
Age:
Gender:
Species:
Apperance:
Power(s):
Tragic Backstory:
Other:

While reading this post, you may be wondering to yourself: "Winter, have you lost your mind?"

The answer is yes.

Now let's go!
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Post by Echo on Wed Jul 02, 2014 6:30 pm

.:All Characters:.

User: Regret

Name: Raven Andromyda Tragydy Yndya Byakhee Lox
Age: OVER NINE THOUSAND! But she looks seventeen, of course.
Gender: Female.

Rest of bio:
Species: Half angel, half demon, half chimera.
Appearance: One white wing, one black wing (with purple feather-tips). Purple cat ears. Busty but slender. Big, beautiful eyes like limpid pools and they change colour depending on her mood. They turn rainbow when she uses her powers. Her hair is black with natural purple highlights. She's also really busty but not in a slutty way. She cut the school blazer into a crop-top on her first day but it looks so good on her she got away with it. Her skin is super-beautifully pale. She has really slim arms and legs but not in an anorexic way, because then she wouldn't have really big breasts that all the boys love (even the gay ones because what are a sexuality lol). She wears black fishnet stockings and black fishnet gloves, and short black shorts with silver buttons and chain stuff. She's super gothic and has like chains and things. Also anything she wears looks hot on her, but her gothic stuff looks super hot. She also has a black demon tail.
Powers: She can dance so well it's like being hypnotised. Also her father experimented on her to make her a superweapon who goes into killmode if the wrong thing happens, and she can't be hurt or stopped when she's in killmode, but it hurts her and she gets really super graceful. Also her wings make her able to fly. And she has light and dark magic and sshe can communicate telepathically with animals because of her chimera half.
Tragic Backstory: Angels don't want her and demons don't want her, so she was adopted by chimeras after her father did experiments on her, and their breath made her half-chimera because Reasons. It made animals love her but humans are scare of her because she's so beautiful and powerful. Also she was nearly raped like a bunch of times, but she's so beautiful and pure no one can bare to hurt her.
Other: Has a British accent.

"A small part of me died while writing this."

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User: Winter Dragon

Name: Cassiopeia Athena Concordia Araminta Persephone Smith (goes by Cassie for short)
Age: Looks 16. Actual age is immortal, probably. Who cares about the number of years
Gender: Female

Rest of bio:
Species: Fairy, but also part-shadow elemental
Appearance: She has soft, blond hair that falls over her shoulders like spun gold, and natural highlights that start off red (like bright crimson red) at the top and fade through the rainbow spectrum to end purple at the bottom. She has a perfect, peachy complexion and perfect, white teeth. Her eyes are iridescent, "like an ocean of rainbow constantly shifting on itself depending on how you look at it." She's slender but curvaceous, which in actual people terms means she has a flat stomach and a perfect hourglass figure. She can even eat all the sweets she wants and will never gain weight. She's also quite strong, despite having no visible muscle.

Additionally, she has a large, beautiful pair of angel wings. Each feather is brilliant white with a glossy, somewhat iridescent sheen. She can hide these wings at will and have them appear again, somehow without damaging her clothes at all. Somehow. Anyway, she herself isn't an angel, but is rather a fairy (as stated higher up on the sheet). The reason that she has angel wings rather than fairy wings is because she's royalty (a princess), and all the royal fairies have them instead of regular fairy wings. It shows their power and status...or something. She doesn't know she's a princess, though.

She wears the regular school sweater rolled up to her sleeves, and hasn't altered it in any way--unless you count the paint splatters in various colors. But they look so nice and artistic, don't they? She's such an artist, guys. It's really important for you to know that she's creative and artistic. Anyway, she couples the sweater with a white jean skirt that also has colorful paint splatters on it. For footwear, she has purposefully mismatched knee-high socks with rainbow patterns on them, and black Mary-Jane shoes.

Powers: She can control light (a power she was born with) and shadow (a power she got when she became part-shadow elemental). And her wings allow her to fly, obviously. If you count the fact that she can take a partial shadow elemental form, that's a power, too. When she takes this form, her hair turns black, her eyes and highlights turn red, her skin turns grayish (but like, not in an ugly way, of course. She's still super pretty) and takes on a somewhat shimmery look, despite her being associated with shadow rather than light in this form. Her wings also turn black, and one of them turns batlike, but the other one stays feathery. She can't transform all the way because she's still part-fairy, so she'll never TRULY fit in. Woe is her. Oh, she also grows fangs and her sense of smell gets superpowered, and she can drink blood and live off of it. So like she's almost like a vampire but she's definitely not a vampire. Sometimes, she can be driven by bloodlust in this form. Shadow elementals don't actually drink blood, but her elemental side was affected by her fairy side.

Tragic Backstory: She's the last surviving member of a line of royalty. When she was a child living in the fairy realm, dark figures came and killed everyone in her family right in front of her. The dark figures feared the family's power, since they were the only ones with the ability to stop...something or other. The figures were going to kill her next, but a shadow elemental whisked her away and brought her to safety on Earth. However, once the elemental touched her, she turned part-shadow elemental herself. The elemental put a spell on her so she wouldn't remember any of her life in the fairy realm, in order to protect her from the evil forces. She lived on Earth with the elemental (who was disguised as a human) for a while before attending this school. One day, the time will come when the spell on her will be removed, and she'll remember who she was and where she came from. When that happens, she'll go back to her kingdom to rid it of evil once and for all.
Other: Did I mention how creative and artistic she is

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User: sparksbet

Name: 死柳 手ゃのß 戦い 戦士兵 (Shiyanagi Thanos Tatakai Senshihei)
This name has meaning because 死柳 means 'death willow.' 手ゃのß is the name of the god of death. 戦い means 'battle' and 戦士兵 means 'mighty warrior.' These names have blessed and cursed him with their mark throughout his long life.
Age: He has walked the Earth for millions of years, but he looks 17.
Gender: Male

Rest of bio:
Species: Half-human half-shinigami
Apperance: His hair is black as the night and hangs over his forehead like the leaves of a willow. His hair is shaggy and unkempt but it only improves his appearance in comparison to all the fakers with hairgel. His eyes are dark as death and his soul, piercing through the lies and thoughts of others. Many a woman have fallen for those eyes, but he has no time for their frivolous desires. He has a scar through his left eye from an old battle. His body is lithe and muscular like a samurai's, but not bulky like all the poser bodybuilders in high school. He wears a black 袴 (hakama) except his has pants because skirts are too girly and get in his way. He has a thick black shoulder pad over his right shoulder and black fingerless gloves with chains on both hands. He has the name of every person he has killed tattooed onto his back to remind him of the value of the human soul. His back is completely covered now even though the writing is really tiny.
Power(s): He wields a カタナガンブレード (katanaganbureido, or katana gunblade) with a four-foot blade, named 敵の刈り取り (teki no karitori), which means "reaper of my enemies." He also carries two 懐剣 (kaiken, or daggers) to use when his カタナガンブレード would be too obvious, named 血液の美しさ (ketsueki no utsukushi-sa) and 魂の叫び (tamashi no sakebi) which mean "beauty of blood" and "cry of the soul." He also carries countless concealed 手裏剣 (shuriken), as well as a pair of ヌンチャク (nunchaku). Because he is part shinigami, he can see how many days people have left in their lives and can change the length as long as he wants. His soul is powerful and he can always tell when people are lying, even if they try to hide it. He can also read people's minds at a glance, though no one can read his.
Tragic Backstory: His mother, 美しい 愛花 (Utsukushi Aihana) was a beautiful 芸者 (geisha) who could never find love, until a mysterious man came for her services. The man never gave his name, and left afterwards without a word. Little did she know that the man was actually a 死神 (shinigami). When the child was born she could feel the death in his soul, and abandoned him before dying in labor. He grew up wandering the streets, learning to fight from experience. As he grew older he learned of his abilities, but he never used them because he knew it was wrong to kill. However, after his many years of wandering the world, he became aquainted with the evil that dwelled within it and vowed to rid the world of evil. He only killed the truly evil, but to keep himself human he had the names of his victims tattooed on his back at each death. Each time he killed he gained a little bit of the person's soul and memories, and so he became wise beyond his years but also very connected to the souls of the dead. He forged his own weapons, and continued on his fight for justice through years and years. Now that he has filled his back, however, he has decided to try to spend his times learning about the ways of the ordinary ephemeral humans to try and understand more of life, death, and the world beyond.
Other: Speaks fluent Japanese

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User: Bells

Name: Christopher James Haley (BUT HE HATES HIS NAME CALL HIM JAMES)
Age: 15
Gender: Male

Rest of bio:
Species: part-werewolf part-various other shifters part human
Apperance: He has pure white shaggy hair that's never brushed yet looks perfect and yellow, animal eyes that seem to hold the wildness of his animal side. He also has fluffy wolf ears that girls automatically want to touch when they see them. To go with his ears he also has a fluffy white tail. He's six foot tall, and extremely pale in a cute way even though he spends most of his time outside in the sun doing animal things like running through the woods. He's also got rather large muscles despite being too busy doing animal things to actually work out.

On one arm he has a tattoo that's a mark of his pack that's some intricate black design that looks mysterious and cool. He also has a tattoo on his back, but it's actually a mark to show that he's special.

Oh, and James normally wears jeans and baggy hoodies that somehow always get torn just right to look incredibly sexy and not just torn up when he changes into various forms. Oh, and they never tear enough to fall off, cause that's just how things work. Now that he's going to be going to school where there's a uniform, he's just switched his baggy hoodies for the black sweater, keeping his jeans. It'll tear just right to look handsome as well, he figures. Oh! And he never wears shoes, cause he's a wolf and he doesn't need those things.

Power(s): He can currently shape-shift into a large white wolf that's magnificent and beautiful and always pure-white despite the fact that it runs through the forest and gets into fights and such. Oh, he can also shift into a white bird and a white tiger because he got bit by them and he's special so it made him able to shift into them. He's also probably able to shift into other convenient things, but he hasn't done it yet because it's just not the right time. It has to be a really important life threatening moment for those abilities to appear, you know.

Oh, and because he's an awesome animal he has super-hearing and reflexes and smelling and is really super duper fast because that's how animals are! He also instantly befriends all animals he meets, even ones that hate wolves or birds or tigers, because he's special.

Tragic Backstory: Despite having been given everything he's ever wanted, James has had a lonely childhood. His parents never quite understood the trials of being a wolf-tiger-bird boy, even though one of them was a panther-girl and the other a bear-man. They had tons of money so they were too busy spending it on him to actually get to know him, they can't even remember his birthday and have their servants buy his overly expensive gifts.

Because of this he started out act out by getting  into fights and drinking and smoking and got arrested quite a few times, but never actually sent to jail. He also smokes and goes out with every girl that he thinks is cute. They all want him for his money, though, so he doesn't actually have any real friends. He's really a nice guy deep down, he's just too busy trying to get attention to show this to people.

Because he's always getting in trouble, his parents are sending him to school because that's how you deal with misbehaving children.

Other: He can play a guitar and the piano and is a wonderful singer! Oh, and he's won many a girl over with his self-composed songs!


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Post by Regret on Wed Jul 02, 2014 7:08 pm

Name: Raven Andromyda Tragydy Yndya Byakhee Lox
Age: OVER NINE THOUSAND! But she looks seventeen, of course.
Gender: Female.
Species: Half angel, half demon, half chimera.
Appearance: One white wing, one black wing (with purple feather-tips). Purple cat ears. Busty but slender. Big, beautiful eyes like limpid pools and they change colour depending on her mood. They turn rainbow when she uses her powers. Her hair is black with natural purple highlights. She's also really busty but not in a slutty way. She cut the school blazer into a crop-top on her first day but it looks so good on her she got away with it. Her skin is super-beautifully pale. She has really slim arms and legs but not in an anorexic way, because then she wouldn't have really big breasts that all the boys love (even the gay ones because what are a sexuality lol). She wears black fishnet stockings and black fishnet gloves, and short black shorts with silver buttons and chain stuff. She's super gothic and has like chains and things. Also anything she wears looks hot on her, but her gothic stuff looks super hot. She also has a black demon tail.
Powers: She can dance so well it's like being hypnotised. Also her father experimented on her to make her a superweapon who goes into killmode if the wrong thing happens, and she can't be hurt or stopped when she's in killmode, but it hurts her and she gets really super graceful. Also her wings make her able to fly. And she has light and dark magic and sshe can communicate telepathically with animals because of her chimera half.
Tragic Backstory: Angels don't want her and demons don't want her, so she was adopted by chimeras after her father did experiments on her, and their breath made her half-chimera because Reasons. It made animals love her but humans are scare of her because she's so beautiful and powerful. Also she was nearly raped like a bunch of times, but she's so beautiful and pure no one can bare to hurt her.
Other: Has a British accent.

A small part of me died while writing this.

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Post by sparksbet on Wed Jul 02, 2014 10:19 pm

Name: 死柳 手ゃのß 戦い 戦士兵 (Shiyanagi Thanos Tatakai Senshihei)
This name has meaning because 死柳 means 'death willow.' 手ゃのß is the name of the god of death. 戦い means 'battle' and 戦士兵 means 'mighty warrior.' These names have blessed and cursed him with their mark throughout his long life.
Age: He has walked the Earth for millions of years, but he looks 17.
Gender: Male
Species: Half-human half-shinigami
Apperance: His hair is black as the night and hangs over his forehead like the leaves of a willow. His hair is shaggy and unkempt but it only improves his appearance in comparison to all the fakers with hairgel. His eyes are dark as death and his soul, piercing through the lies and thoughts of others. Many a woman have fallen for those eyes, but he has no time for their frivolous desires. He has a scar through his left eye from an old battle. His body is lithe and muscular like a samurai's, but not bulky like all the poser bodybuilders in high school. He wears a black 袴 (hakama) except his has pants because skirts are too girly and get in his way. He has a thick black shoulder pad over his right shoulder and black fingerless gloves with chains on both hands. He has the name of every person he has killed tattooed onto his back to remind him of the value of the human soul. His back is completely covered now even though the writing is really tiny.
Power(s): He wields a カタナガンブレード (katanaganbureido, or katana gunblade) with a four-foot blade, named 敵の刈り取り (teki no karitori), which means "reaper of my enemies." He also carries two 懐剣 (kaiken, or daggers) to use when his カタナガンブレード would be too obvious, named 血液の美しさ (ketsueki no utsukushi-sa) and 魂の叫び (tamashi no sakebi) which mean "beauty of blood" and "cry of the soul." He also carries countless concealed 手裏剣 (shuriken), as well as a pair of ヌンチャク (nunchaku). Because he is part shinigami, he can see how many days people have left in their lives and can change the length as long as he wants. His soul is powerful and he can always tell when people are lying, even if they try to hide it. He can also read people's minds at a glance, though no one can read his.
Tragic Backstory: His mother, 美しい 愛花 (Utsukushi Aihana) was a beautiful 芸者 (geisha) who could never find love, until a mysterious man came for her services. The man never gave his name, and left afterwards without a word. Little did she know that the man was actually a 死神 (shinigami). When the child was born she could feel the death in his soul, and abandoned him before dying in labor. He grew up wandering the streets, learning to fight from experience. As he grew older he learned of his abilities, but he never used them because he knew it was wrong to kill. However, after his many years of wandering the world, he became aquainted with the evil that dwelled within it and vowed to rid the world of evil. He only killed the truly evil, but to keep himself human he had the names of his victims tattooed on his back at each death. Each time he killed he gained a little bit of the person's soul and memories, and so he became wise beyond his years but also very connected to the souls of the dead. He forged his own weapons, and continued on his fight for justice through years and years. Now that he has filled his back, however, he has decided to try to spend his times learning about the ways of the ordinary ephemeral humans to try and understand more of life, death, and the world beyond.
Other: Speaks fluent Japanese
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Post by Bells on Wed Jul 02, 2014 11:50 pm

Name: Christopher James Haley (BUT HE HATES HIS NAME CALL HIM JAMES)
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Species: part-werewolf part-various other shifters part human
Apperance: He has pure white shaggy hair that's never brushed yet looks perfect and yellow, animal eyes that seem to hold the wildness of his animal side. He also has fluffy wolf ears that girls automatically want to touch when they see them. To go with his ears he also has a fluffy white tail. He's six foot tall, and extremely pale in a cute way even though he spends most of his time outside in the sun doing animal things like running through the woods. He's also got rather large muscles despite being too busy doing animal things to actually work out.

On one arm he has a tattoo that's a mark of his pack that's some intricate black design that looks mysterious and cool. He also has a tattoo on his back, but it's actually a mark to show that he's special.

Oh, and James normally wears jeans and baggy hoodies that somehow always get torn just right to look incredibly sexy and not just torn up when he changes into various forms. Oh, and they never tear enough to fall off, cause that's just how things work. Now that he's going to be going to school where there's a uniform, he's just switched his baggy hoodies for the black sweater, keeping his jeans. It'll tear just right to look handsome as well, he figures. Oh! And he never wears shoes, cause he's a wolf and he doesn't need those things.

Power(s): He can currently shape-shift into a large white wolf that's magnificent and beautiful and always pure-white despite the fact that it runs through the forest and gets into fights and such. Oh, he can also shift into a white bird and a white tiger because he got bit by them and he's special so it made him able to shift into them. He's also probably able to shift into other convenient things, but he hasn't done it yet because it's just not the right time. It has to be a really important life threatening moment for those abilities to appear, you know.

Oh, and because he's an awesome animal he has super-hearing and reflexes and smelling and is really super duper fast because that's how animals are! He also instantly befriends all animals he meets, even ones that hate wolves or birds or tigers, because he's special.

Tragic Backstory: Despite having been given everything he's ever wanted, James has had a lonely childhood. His parents never quite understood the trials of being a wolf-tiger-bird boy, even though one of them was a panther-girl and the other a bear-man. They had tons of money so they were too busy spending it on him to actually get to know him, they can't even remember his birthday and have their servants buy his overly expensive gifts.

Because of this he started out act out by getting  into fights and drinking and smoking and got arrested quite a few times, but never actually sent to jail. He also smokes and goes out with every girl that he thinks is cute. They all want him for his money, though, so he doesn't actually have any real friends. He's really a nice guy deep down, he's just too busy trying to get attention to show this to people.

Because he's always getting in trouble, his parents are sending him to school because that's how you deal with misbehaving children.

Other: He can play a guitar and the piano and is a wonderful singer! Oh, and he's won many a girl over with his self-composed songs!

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Sending out your army, but you still can't win;
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Post by Echo on Thu Jul 03, 2014 4:21 pm

((Uh... Uh... Uhhh... I have no idea how to start this thing. Oh what the heck, I'll just wing it))

Cassie

I walk up to the school, dragging my suitcase behind me. It's not a heavy suitcase, because I don't have too many belongings. But that's what it's like when you're living with a single, working class parent. You have to make some sacrifices. Speaking of whom, my parent was working another part-time job right now and couldn't be here to help move me in and see me off. So, I'd be alone again.

As always.

I make my way to the main entrance of the school. I'm hiding my wings right now, because they'd just get in the way and probably make me look like a freak or something. As if the hair and eyes aren't bad enough already. I've always had to hide because I look so unnatural. This is actually the first time I've ever gone to a real school--I've been homeschooled all my life. My parent said there would be other kids like me here, but I wasn't sure...

Why couldn't I ever just fit in?

I get to the main door, which is as big and ornate as the rest of the place. I stop in front of it to take a deep breath. This is it, my new school. Will I make friends, or will I just be an outcast?

((Oh gods why am I writing this. Haha))
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Post by Bells on Thu Jul 03, 2014 4:52 pm

James

As I stepped out of the big black limo and looked in the direction of the school, I scowled. Why did I have to come here? Oh, yeah, because they were trying to get rid of me again, that's why.

"Get my things," I ordered the driver when he'd gotten out. "Or better yet, send them back, because I won't be here long."

Maybe if I could get myself kicked out it would send a message to my parents. I mean, they could have at least put down their golf clubs long enough to take me to school, but no, they had the servants do it. Just thinking about it ticked me off enough that I dug around in my pocket till my hand hit my pack of cigarettes and my lighter. I already had one lit by the time the servant had come back around the car with my bags hanging off of him. It surprised me a bit, I mean, hadn't I brought ten bags? Why was he only holding three?

"Where are rest of my things?" I demanded.

"I'll get them after I drop these off," the servant responded. "Perhaps you carry a few?"

"Ridiculous," I scoffed. "I don't even want to be here. So you should carry them."

And with that I began walking towards the school.

"Are you supposed to be smoking? Also, where are your shoes?"

"Shut up. I don't need those things, and I can do whatever I want."

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You'll break me,
You're gonna find in time
You're standing too close to a flame that's burning
Hotter than the sun in the middle of July.
Sending out your army, but you still can't win;
Listen up, silly boy, 'cuz I'm gonna tell you why..."
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Post by Echo on Thu Jul 03, 2014 5:13 pm

Cassie

I hear some talking off in the distance and look in the direction of the sound. The guy I see is like...really really hot. And oh my gosh, his ears and tail are adorable! They look so soft and fuzzy... And if there's someone here with animal ears, maybe I'm not so out of place after all. Maybe. I hope he doesn't think I look freaky, with my iridescent eyes and rainbow highlights. That would be awful...
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Post by Bells on Thu Jul 03, 2014 5:58 pm

James

Just about the same time that I'd begun completely ignoring the servants complaints, I spotted a girl looking in our direction. I immediately offered her a charming grin, because why not? She was pretty and I was currently single since discovering my last girlfriend just wanted me for my money. My grin turned into a scowl when I remembered that. Why should I be nice to this girl I didn't know? She was probably just the same.

"Hey, Rainbow head," I greeted the pretty girl. "What the hell are you staring at?"

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Sending out your army, but you still can't win;
Listen up, silly boy, 'cuz I'm gonna tell you why..."
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Post by Echo on Thu Jul 03, 2014 6:39 pm

Cassie

Oh.

I guess he doesn't like me.

I just knew my looks would make me weird! Why do I have to have hair or eyes like this? I wish I could just look normal.

Instead of giving him a direct answer, I mumble "Nothing" and slip inside the school. I should probably just go find my dorm now... I hope my roommates won't act like this, too.
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Post by Bells on Thu Jul 03, 2014 6:58 pm

James

She actually mumbled and walked away from me. That wasn't possible, all girls loved me! I mean, sure, I called her 'rainbow head' but that was no reason to get upset!

"Hurry it up with the bags," I snapped at my servant and dropped my cigarette to the ground, stomping it out. I then ran into the school to catch up with her.

"Hey, what're you doing?" I asked. "You're supposed to actually respond when someone talks to you. Mumbling isn't responding."

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Post by Echo on Thu Jul 03, 2014 7:03 pm

Cassie

I stop and look at him over my shoulder.

"You called me 'Rainbow Head,'" I say. Then I keep walking.
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Post by Bells on Thu Jul 03, 2014 7:06 pm

James

"And?" I asked, easily keeping up with her. I mean, I'm a wolf after all, we're fast. "Your hair is like a rainbow, isn't it?"

My ears laid down as I spoke, realizing that perhaps I'd really upset her. I got over it a minute later, though. She wouldn't stay upset. I mean, girl's loved me. I'm cute, rich, and awesome.

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Post by Echo on Thu Jul 03, 2014 7:57 pm

Cassie

"Yeah," I say, "but you said it in a mean way. It makes a difference." I see his ears move down. Does he feel bad or something? Maybe he isn't so bad after all... But then his ears go back up and I dismiss the possibility.
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James

"What if it was?" I questioned, starting to get irritated. Why didn't she just give into my awesomeness already? "If it's the truth, that shouldn't matter. Besides, you were staring at me, that's rude, too."

Perhaps I could pay her not to be mad at me. It was my parents money, so it didn't matter what I did with it.

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Cassie

"I wasn't staring at you," I tell him, "I looked at you. I thought your ears looked fluffy and cute. Too bad they're connected to someone who's rude." I give a huff, turn back, and start walking again.
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Post by Bells on Thu Jul 03, 2014 8:13 pm

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This girl was making me want to light another cigarette, or better yet, hit something. Girls never get mad at me, so what made her so different? Running after her, yet again, I decided to change tactics. It just didn't do to have a girl not like me. It wasn't natural.

"Fine, I'm rude, but you're right about the ears. They're fluffy. I'm Christopher James, but just call me James, and you can pet them if you want."

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Post by Echo on Thu Jul 03, 2014 9:08 pm

Cassie

"No thank you," I tell him. I don't want to pet the ears of someone who's rude, even if they are cute and fluffy. Almost as an afterthought, I add, "I'm Cassiopeia. Cassie for short."
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Post by Bells on Thu Jul 03, 2014 9:29 pm

James

I'll admit, sometimes if it wasn't me saying something, I might think that thing wasn't the best thing that could have been said. However, since it's me who says it, it could never be that it wasn't the best thing to say.

"Your name matches your hair, they're both weird," I replied. "Although, I guess it changes things if you go by a nickname."

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Post by Echo on Thu Jul 03, 2014 9:32 pm

Cassie

"Can you just leave me alone?" I ask. It occurs to me while I'm walking that I have no idea where I'm going, but I don't actually care. I hope I can find somebody nicer who can help point me in the right direction.
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Post by Bells on Thu Jul 03, 2014 9:48 pm

James

"I could," I scoffed. "Or I could just keep following you. I've decided, you're annoying, so I'm going to call you Rainbow instead of Cassie. You alright with that?"

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Post by Echo on Thu Jul 03, 2014 9:54 pm

Cassie

"You've decided I'm annoying?" I ask dismissively. I don't bother to answer his question.
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Post by Bells on Thu Jul 03, 2014 10:09 pm

James

"Yes, and I'm right." I informed her. "You are very annoying. I'm a pretty awesome guy, you know. Everyone loves me, so there's something wrong with you, which makes you annoying."

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Post by Echo on Thu Jul 03, 2014 10:13 pm

Cassie

I have to pause at that. Then I bring my hand to my mouth and stifle a giggle with some success.

"Okay," I manage. "Sure, okay. Whatever you say, man."
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Post by Bells on Thu Jul 03, 2014 10:31 pm

James

I grinned at her response, my tail beginning to wave back and forth.
"See, now you get it, Rainbow."

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